At 1/16/16 08:01 AM, Flowers10 wrote:
At 1/11/16 06:57 AM, fxscreamer wrote:
As my 8th official landscape of the world I'm creating (Ion Valley), I present you the suburbs of Ohmsdale. This luxurious neighborhood is home to the main characters and has many wonderful features. Being only minutes from
Hey man, your improving! i feel like this is all there it just needs some slight changes.
what bothers me the most about this one is how much contrast there is, there is alot of pure white in your values.
Pure white only happens when you look straight into a light or when it reflects off a material. but your mountains in the back are all white. try to be more subtle with your value shift, put a layer filled with black turned on to saturtion mode ontop of your work and color pick to check it constantly. second is that your colors are rather boring, try live it up with diffrent hue's instead of just one plain color. best is to even give your shadows a diffrent hue then your lights to get a subtle contrast going on. Im thinking you might want to blut your shadows too as they go further away, especially for your tree and building. For composition i like how you made it a postcard but the top half of your painting doesnt have anyhting in it, why is it there? I moved it down a bit and added some foreground elements. Remember to allways have a foreground mid and background. also i toned down the saturation a bit they might actually still be too saturated.
Damn that looks nice! Thanks for the tips and paintover! I'll admit it's not the first time I've been told about white light and using FULL white. I apparently let that get away from me. Color is something I'm still struggling with constantly, so I'm all ears. I need to get in the practice of starting with dark values and working light. I think I've been doing the opposite sometimes. Plus my color relationships are still shaky.
As far as the foreground, I actually did have a bush exactly where you had it, but then I omitted it. I did not however, have the tree. I think the tree works great in your example, but I remember thinking that I wanted a "big sky" open environment in view, especially with that tiny airship flying overhead. The sunset sky in itself was thought as part of the composition. However, I'll admit the tree could probably work even better with some adjustments. *smacks head*.
There's lots of little things I'm constantly seeing mistakes in, but that's why I keep chugging away at these landscapes. I have a couple more planned, so I'll try to use your tips in seeing what I can come up with. Thanks again! :D
On another note I made a map of Ion Valley. It's done in a style of a kids map you get from a gift shop. Plus it has some notes done from my characters....apparently they're fighting over the map...hehe. The 4000px version is better for more detail.
LINK: http://i.imgur.com/X7J1g4V.jpg