Well I think I found an animator. I sent him a copy of the script. So now we wait. I'll get to work on part 2 sometime later on. I already have a few pages done, I just need to finish. Right now I'm currently working on the scripts for my comicbook. Which reminds me, If any artist would like to help me with that as well, I'll gladly take the help.
I have a bit of a story that I would LOVE for someone to read and tell me what they think, if any one would please.
Just tell me you will, and I'll send it in .doc format via e-mail.
Thanx in advance
i will help you out, just send all the things you want me to read for you to rbbtmikeh8er@yahoo.com, i will tell you what I think.
At 6/30/04 01:36 AM, The_Redangleking wrote: DO NOT SEND ME ANYTHING IF YOU DO NOT WANT CRITICSM. I'm a tough critic, but it's all to help.
Fuck dude, thats what we want. Right now, we are working on a scirpt for our first (and hopfully not last) flash! Next time i hear from Snerd I will ask him to email the scirpt.
Obviously they aren't familar with constructive critique.
Hello, I'm RaindropsRed - your friendly neighborhood crazy russian man. Your crew intruged me because Newgrounds should have more educated posts opposed to the idiot in General. A writers club would be ideal - maybe people could express interest and grow up. Maybe I'm wrong? But give me some feedback. I post stories in the LNL but I feel unappreciated there, so this would be a good place - if your willing - to accept my submissions.
At 6/30/04 01:39 AM, Eskimo_Joe wrote:At 6/30/04 01:36 AM, The_Redangleking wrote: DO NOT SEND ME ANYTHING IF YOU DO NOT WANT CRITICSM. I'm a tough critic, but it's all to help.Fuck dude, thats what we want. Right now, we are working on a scirpt for our first (and hopfully not last) flash! Next time i hear from Snerd I will ask him to email the scirpt.
Hell no, negro! He has nothing to do with the project. (I haven't anything against you but we're over halfway done) I'll include him in our next project if he wants to write or be a script editor, that's ok with me. We've already started on this, though. How would you like to write a police drama? That was supposed to be what we tackled next after our western.
Hey other writers crew whats new, BTW congrats on page 5, just wabted to stop by see what you are up to thease days...
~X~
Thanks, man. We're trying to finish a western. We finally got an animator. All we need to do is make part 2 and a trailer for part one and we've got it beat.
At 6/30/04 04:06 AM, RaindropsRed wrote: Hello, I'm RaindropsRed - your friendly neighborhood crazy russian man.
Yay! Every crew needs a Russian guy!
Your crew intruged me because Newgrounds should have more educated posts opposed to the idiot in General.
Amen to that brother!
A writers club would be ideal - maybe people could express interest and grow up.
Yeah, sounds good to me, I think.
Maybe I'm wrong? But give me some feedback.
you are right.
I post stories in the LNL but I feel unappreciated there, so this would be a good place - if your willing - to accept my submissions.
Whats the LNL? I am just glad to have you aboard! Anyways. . . .
Who is this animator guy?!
At 6/30/04 09:58 AM, Binjin_Purj wrote: I'll send you the first chapter. Ok?
Send away my friend, thats why I am here.
The animator? I can't remember all of his NG name but he responded in our "Animator(s) needed" post. His name had "jester" in it. I sent him the script.
At 6/30/04 12:54 PM, Snerd wrote: The animator? I can't remember all of his NG name but he responded in our "Animator(s) needed" post. His name had "jester" in it. I sent him the script.
Sounds good to me. Now all we have to do is wait. . . . .
I sent a copy of the first chapter of my story to both The_Redangleking and Eskimo_Joe... just incase you don't check your email often.
At 6/30/04 09:18 PM, The_Redangleking wrote:At 6/30/04 09:17 PM, Binjin_Purj wrote: I sent a copy of the first chapter of my story to both The_Redangleking and Eskimo_Joe... just incase you don't check your email often.\I saw it, but haven't had a chance to read it. I'll send you an e-mail with my review.
Alright, thanx alot.
i love writing. i am writing a feew stories write now. sorry about the pun.
I'm not a bad writer myself. I started work on a book a while ago, but lost inspiration after about 25 pages. I also found a lot of scientific flaws with some of my theories and such...
But anyways, I would love to join this club. I think that it is nice that there is something a little more serene in Newgrounds.
Why is it that nobody posts for a long time after I posts? ALWAYS!!!
I wasn't asking why people don't respond to my posts. It's just that people can have a steady conversation going with a post every 30 seconds, and when I step in, it stops...
It's freaky.
At 6/30/04 03:59 PM, The_Redangleking wrote: Wha? Nah, I don't wanna write for this club (That's what the LNL is for) I said I just wanna help criticize and edit for you all. I'm lending out my writing brilliance for anyone who wants it ^^
However, If you want a cop drama, I already have one written out...
Well, first we already have done a rewrite. Secondly, you may help edit part 2 since the ending needs to be just right. Third, you may contribute elements of your story but I want everyone to be involved with the story. You can do the entire plot, send us an idea, write it, and send it to us for opinions. That's how we did our western. Everyone gets involved this way. Everyone is happy.
At 6/30/04 03:59 PM, The_Redangleking wrote: However, If you want a cop drama, I already have one written out...
A cop drama! YAY! I already have ideas for some of the characters. . . .
At 6/30/04 10:22 PM, Snerd wrote:That's how we did our western.
Have we heard from the animator?
Everyone gets involved this way. Everyone is happy.
Amen to that brother.
At 7/1/04 09:26 AM, Eskimo_Joe wrote:
Have we heard from the animator?
I haven't. He probably stole the idea. He won't get too fucking far without an ending if he did. That's why I wanted to finish it in parts instead of having one whole movie. Anyway, if it ever gets posted I want you to send an e-mail to Wade telling him it was stolen. I'm sending one, too, but you help out credibility.
hey people! i like to write. right now im writing a mortal kombat story and writing down the concepts of a spiderman story i wanna write.
At 7/1/04 02:17 PM, Snerd wrote: Anyway, if it ever gets posted I want you to send an e-mail to Wade telling him it was stolen. I'm sending one, too, but you help out credibility.
Okay, thats if he does post it. . . .
At 7/1/04 02:19 PM, AC500BELOW wrote: hey people! i like to write. right now im writing a mortal kombat story and writing down the concepts of a spiderman story i wanna write.
Alright, you are in the club! I would suggest that you should try to write something a little more unique, not some rip off of another writers work
At 7/1/04 03:34 PM, Eskimo_Joe wrote:
Alright, you are in the club! I would suggest that you should try to write something a little more unique, not some rip off of another writers work
i write my own stories...oh yeah, im not ripping anyone off, its called fan fiction. alot of sites have them.
Anyone get to my story yet... just checking, no rush...
At 7/2/04 11:17 AM, The_Redangleking wrote:At 7/2/04 11:15 AM, Binjin_Purj wrote: Anyone get to my story yet... just checking, no rush...Check your e-mail. I sent it last night.
Damn. My email seems to always be delayed. I checked it this morning.
Thanx!
At 7/2/04 11:22 AM, The_Redangleking wrote:At 7/2/04 11:21 AM, Binjin_Purj wrote:Damn. My email seems to always be delayed. I checked it this morning.No problem. You have a lot of kinks to work out, but it was intresting. I wish to read the rest once you have it...
Thanx!
Do you want me to tell you what I had in mind to circle te story around? It will spoil the ending, but I would like to see what you think of it.
Eskimo Joe, was there anything else you wanted to put into the script? Was the rest good enough where we only "needed" a bar brawl?
I was thinking about what you said about adding that particular scene, we should shoot that one as an alternate for the "Flash DvD" release. The gun draw is a little bit more inherent to the story. I want the bar fight, though. It just doesn't seem to belong. I'm sure we could find a way to work it in if we tried.
At 7/2/04 12:26 PM, Snerd wrote: I want the bar fight, though. It just doesn't seem to belong. I'm sure we could find a way to work it in if we tried.
Hmmm. . . . . . I think we need to pump that movie up with action. So, if we could put in the bar brawl and just have it so the guy that gets his ass kicked gets his brothers to get revenge, then the rest of the story is the same.
I like it. . . how about you?
