At 9/25/04 05:30 PM, Eskimo_Joe wrote: We need more recruits. . . any ideas?
How about drugs? I don't know... Maybe we should just wait until HeH comes out. That should be promotion enough. Remember, "A Writers Crew Production" is in the opening sequence. Once people see how serious we are about this, we'll get a few more people at least.
At 9/26/04 02:07 PM, Snerd wrote: Maybe we should just wait until HeH comes out. That should be promotion enough.
Yeah, till then we can just mellow out and share our dirtest secrets!!! Like -Joe- is acctually a Swedish hooker, and that I am the one and only Lord Of the Dance.
At 9/27/04 12:21 AM, Eskimo_Joe wrote:At 9/26/04 02:07 PM, Snerd wrote: Maybe we should just wait until HeH comes out. That should be promotion enough.Yeah, till then we can just mellow out and share our dirtest secrets!!! Like -Joe- is acctually a Swedish hooker, and that I am the one and only Lord Of the Dance.
-Joe- has stopped posting on the BBS but in an AIM conversation he said: "dang how the fuck did he find out". I wrote my revenge movie. It's about what I would've done in certain circumstances if I were allowed to get away with the acts of violence. It's pretty good. It may be shit to everyone else and only great to me because I'm seriously pissed, but that's a given. I just need to get this off my chest like a Cleveland Steamer. ^_^
ha ha, when you told me to read this, i forgot to post. . . so yeah.
Nothing new here. .
At 9/28/04 09:21 PM, Eskimo_Joe wrote: ha ha, when you told me to read this, i forgot to post. . . so yeah.
Nothing new here. .
Well, I've decided to make my revenge movie's main character have a certain continuity in other flash films. He may appear in "Everybody Knows" but that has yet to be decided since I've only written a small portion of the script (EK will be my biggest film to date).
At 9/29/04 09:44 PM, Eskimo_Joe wrote: Everybody Knows is your nest movie?
I'm working that out now. I may just go on and do the sequels to HeH. I'm gonna make that a trilogy. If -Joe- would agree to it or I could find another animator (-Joe- is my primary choice, I'd only search for another if he disagreed) I'd make EK after Hang 'em High. I don't wanna be known as the guy that does the westerns. He has, however, agreed to my revenge movie (working on a title) and a short funny film about Jules (from Pulp Fiction) as a subsitute teacher entitled, "Jules the Substitute Teacher". Do you wanna help collaborate on a comedy, Eskimo Joe? A friend of mine and I are planning on working on a comedy together. I think you would round out the writing staff nicely.
I write about 8 different things at once (it keeps me busy. I write my spare time) so I had an idea: a bunch of short films with no seeming connection. There would be a connection, though. There is a strong box filled with $100,000 dollars worth of gold. I would write only one of the short stories. Others could do how ever they pleased. The only thing about plot is that they must meet up in the end and have some kind of Sergio Leone type Mexican standoff. They all spot each other. They don't know each other, but they know what the others are after and they'll be damned before they let them take it. How about it? This could get more writers envolved. This is what I had invisioned for Writers Crew from the start. All are allowed to participate. To submit ideas just post here and tell us you would like to work on the project. Almost no ideas will be rejected. Examples of bad entries: stick figures, ending the thing with "Peanut Butter Jelly Time," etc. You know what gets blammed, so don't submit anything like that. Alright? Everyone got the rules? Then start writing!
-Snerd
Well... I've got some good news... My girlfriend hasn't left me. Her sister, who is a major fuckhead, played a cruel joke on me. So no revenge movie, but the character of Nicholas will appear in the short film compilation (I'm working on a title but thinking about calling it "Gold Rush"). -Joe- signed on as a writer of a short film. Spots still remain and most stories will be accepted.
Good, i have no time to do stuff anymore. . . so i am not going to help out too much
Sorry, i have to keep my away message up, this faggot is spamming me with like 50 different accounts.
So how are you?
At 10/2/04 11:27 PM, Eskimo_Joe wrote: Sorry, i have to keep my away message up, this faggot is spamming me with like 50 different accounts.
So how are you?
Fine. Are you gonna be able to work on that short film thing? You don't have to write very much and you can almost do anything with it. If you're interested I'll send you an e-mail with all of the things (only like 2 or 3) that you must include in your story. It'll be great and a great way to showcase new and upcoming talent.
At 10/3/04 02:45 PM, Snerd wrote: If you're interested I'll send you an e-mail with all of the things (only like 2 or 3)
Well, kids, I believe we're officially dead now. No one has come back 'cept good ol' me. It's been fun. I wish we could have done the things I had planned. This crew would've been a great source of talent, had people been interested. Oh, well. We'll still flashes under the crew name. Maybe that will restore life into this place. To all that were faithful, thanks. *turns the lights off and closes the door. Snerd still stands in the doorway. He sighs and for the first time in many years, sheds a tear.* And so ended a great chapter the young writer's career and life...
allright i check in and find out no one is posting so i will. snerd you were being a little annoying bitch so i bitch slaped you. i will still work on hem high i just dont need constant interuptions.now i quit NG foreva
Is this topic still active? =/
If so, I'm looking for someone funny to help me co-write a script. My msn is rust3d@hotmail.com
can i join i did alot of writing for less heard of sites
Hey, I am also looking for a flash artist, I have an idea and i want a person who can actually animte good. so if there is an artist who wants an idea e-mail me at eeecampy@hotmail.com, or just reply to this message.... what ever you want to do.
Well since the General section is full of many idiots flooding it with meaningless topics and feed the pointless ones my written work is not being commented. Anyways I would like someone to comment and give oppinions on my thing i have written about 20 minutes ago. I personnaly enjoy it myself.
--Reading Part--
I am flying into the abyss of which I no not where it goes. It always calls to me and so I come. I have tread it so many times but never have thought to go in. I am afraid yet overjoyed, I am scared yet I am brave, I am God yet I am done.
This is my ending, I can feel it, nothing seems to be adding up as it has been forever. It seems to be calling into my heart, I feel it shaking inside of me, it scares me , it warms me. I know not whats down there but I shall soon figure it out.
I know fall into the abyss it is enclosing fast, it sucks me down as if it is a whirlwind of mind distortion and bright light. Speaking to me in the dimming light as I go down, I feel her. She is close, I may not know what is down but I shall soon surpass her and figure out this puzzle for myself.
I reach the last leg of my journey I feel my heart tensing up, I feel my mind performing for me, I feel as if I am one with nothing. Why does this happen so suddenly, does she not come out now...I feel so hallow inside, yet I feel my inside swishing back in forth with all my undead organs......I can feel her, she feels me, I am feeling her, she is feeling me......I decease.
Hello. I ask if I may join this "Writers Crew" I have written a few novels as well as a large amount of short stories. I cam to NG to try and put some of the stories into flash form.
here's a request:
i began to write an "angelhearth" episode ( no angelhearth flash came out for the moment) but I couldn't finish it 'cause I had no more inspiration
angelhearth is a serie started by a scotish friend of mine and it's about 3 guys :
legion mcdonagh : magical skills 19 years old
domo mc donagh : fighter 18 years old
linus: weirdo 15 years old
this one is a "weed day's special"
it begins with the three guys smokin a joint on the beach , when 2 gigantic turtle fins grab them and take them into the water
text i've written:
When they're in the water , they're in a big air bubble. the beast throw the bubble out of the water and grabs it with his back fins
so they swim into the sea till they finally get to somekind of drop-off
the beast releases the bubble that floats at the height of his head , he sits on the drop-off and takes a weird bong
meanwhile the guys are fascinate by what they're seeing
Linus: damn ! i'm scared of depth and emptyness ... Legion guive me that pot back
(Legion is paralysed and still had the joint in his hand )
Legion guives the pot to Linus but he's still starring at the beast that's
smoking his "bubblebong"
Domo: Maaan!
(Legion "wakes up")
Le: what do you want?
the monster answers by telepathy
B: never heard about seaweed?
yesterday my cousin came by ... You know my cousin ? Well he's a cool guy from the golf of mexico, so he brought me some small mushrooms and we had a long talk about petrol damages...
that was so tripping
D: Yeah, but what about us?
B: ... He told me that in the year 2000 a petrol damage killed over 1 hundred-thousand birds in france! could you imagine such thing! birds never go shit in your bath !
Li: great , but why did you took us here?
B:And this morning I woke up and I saw a green fish, so i followed that fish , and i hearted my head against it
but it wasn't a fish it was a boat
Li: where can i put my ashes?
a jellyfish passes by and guives the beast an electric shok
B: thx bob
Le: Are we finally gonna know...
B: shut up!
in 1823 my dad had to go visit his mother in holland because she was gonna die , and naturally he passed by scotland , but in that time there was a verry powerfull man who hated hydromonsters , so when my dad passed by scotland , seamus mcdonagh asked him for a duel and my father didn't accept , he was a verry pacific dude, so seamus getted ofenced and killed my father , after my grand-mother died and she didn't even saw her son
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I ask you guys to finish that story
plz send me your story by e-mail : the_motorlemmy@hotmail.com
I need an animator for a flash ive been working on for a while now. If your intrested email me at john_curnew@msn.com
My name is DtotheG, and I am a writer
*Hi DtotheG*
Aside from my series Experiments and Crap, I also have spent the past 4 years writting a book called "Robert DiMorro: A Week Of Hell"
If anyone wants to read it, drop me a line. Or IM me at DtotheG88. I'll check back periodically, as I'm animating and playing Guitar Hero right now.
Im writing sum books myself. im more of a young adult writer. u no, i write books like harry potter and things like that. novels. i have a few im working on right now called "the VFD" (a copyright of of a series of unfurtunate events) and the 4 beings ( not a copy off of the fantstic 4 or zoom) the VFD is a book about 2 secret orginizations, 1 completly made of boys, one completlty made of girls. the whole book is basically about the war between the 2 sides and what happends inbetween. the 4 beings is about 4 12 year old kids who become friends with god kids. each one of them have a special power including telekeniesis, control of the 4 elements, the power to make watevr they draw become real, and infinate knowledge.another one i have is about 3 kids who get trapped inside the school for 2 weeks. no teachers, no principals, no one to order them around.but, the school has something that none of the students havce known about.i have another one that doesnt have a title, but its about a kid who goes to camp, and the camp has tons of secrets about it. that one is still in progress. so yes, im a writer, may i join?
Ah... That sounds... um... Great!!!!
This is my first posting on this thread, I'm not interested in joining unless I get one of the following.
1. An animator to complement my scriptwriting expertise.
2. A removable tatoo
3. A sense of belonging I DON'T WANT TO BE A GOTH ANYMORE!!!!!
Here's the standard spiel everyone gets. A personal Ad if you will.
I live in N.S.W. Australia and I visit NG every day, because I'm a great fan of film and literature. I'm a semi-professional writer and I'd love to see one of my many screenplays animated in stunning flash format. My prefered genre is serious SCI-FI but nothing is beyond my ken (or Barbie for that matter).
I'm willing to collaborate on any prospective project on the condition, that the animator's dedication and skill will be sufficient to do it justice.
Should you need an experienced screenwriter or a demonstration of my ability, you needn't hesitate to ask.
I'm spreading myself around multiple threads at the moment so It's a bit hard to keep track of each one, best to send me a personal message directly.
Thanks,
CHIKUNHED.
:B: ... He told me that in the year 2000 a petrol damage killed over 1 hundred-thousand birds in france! could you imagine such thing! birds never go shit in your bath !
Li: great , but why did you took us here?
B:And this morning I woke up and I saw a green fish, so i followed that fish , and i hearted my head against it
but it wasn't a fish it was a boat
Li: where can i put my ashes?
a jellyfish passes by and guives the beast an electric shok
B: thx bob
Le: Are we finally gonna know...
B: shut up!
Linus, you actually want someone to finish THAT story? Are you on crack?
Pay close attention now... Did you see that? No? Well I just finished it for you. Give us a break!
The 1st 4 chapters of Robert DiMorro
my story is too big for NGBBS posts. its 19,346 characters in length
I know you guys aren't story reviewers but I was wondering if you could tell me what you think. It's part of the Ninja Guild, which i'm the leader of. I know it won't make sense to you but can you try? Also, please don't focus of the script style of writing, more on other ways of improving.
Chapter 36
The last stand of Vortz Xanth
The Ninjas were almost instantly surrounded by Goblins and huge red creatures with wings which resembled the Devil itself.
Vortz: Take their weapons and kill them all but that one.
He raised his finger and pointed at Q. The Goblins raised their weapons, grinning. The red monsters did nothing. Q just walked up to Vortz calmly.
Q: How did you do this? HOW DID YOU DO THIS?
The Ninja had never seen Q lose his temper before.
Vortz: It was all to-
Q didn't wait for an explantion. He punched Vortz in his blinded eye, knocking him to the floor. The Goblins began their attack at this, trying to hack away at them but the Guild was prepared. Six Goblins fell before they even began their attack and even more after that. Blood sprayed everwhere and during this final battle, nobody noticed that the large devils had done nothing, just watched. Natsume ran her sword through one but was picked up by another. A quick slash from Kazuo, and she was back on the ground. Raven seemed to be moving a lot faster than the others but she was slowing down. Eventully she stopped all together and collapsed, as her special ability drained her energy. Sulivan ran over to protect her but he knew this wouldn't work for long. Heihachi approached a demon and went in to attack but something strange happened before he got there. The Devil made a gesture with his hands.
Devil: The Ryn to not wish to hurt you...
Confused by this, Heihachi only just had enough time to parry a blow from an unseen attacker. He spun around. It was Wickedform. Instantly the battle stopped.
Wickedform: Well, I know we're all having fun slashing eachother to bits, but I has something important to share with all you nice folks.
There was so much sarcasm in his voice nobody could have missed it.
Wickedform: As far as I can tell, you are aware of your friends missingness. And I have a deal to make with you. I will return them to you, on one condition.
Q: What is it?
Wickedform: You give me the leaders of both groups. Q and Vortz.
There were shouts all around, particually from Vortz, making it clear that it wasn't likely. Then they realised most of the Goblins were shouting yes. They didn't care about their leader, just their survival.
Wickedform: As you wish.
He waved his hand and four guards appeared. The Ninjas recognised one as Muta, a man who had imprisoned their friends at the tower. They place some sacks on the floor and emtyed them out, revealing Indigo, Kage, Zabuza and Yomikusi. The guards pulled out knives.
Wickedform: If I don't get what I want, they get it across the throat.
During this time, nobody had been paying attention to the Ryn. Therefore nobody had noticed them moving silently towards Wickedform. Except Q. And he realised what they were doing.
Q: If it to save them, I offer myself and Vortz.
He stepped forward, and Vortz was thrown in by his soldiers.
Wickedform drew his dagger and stood face to face with them.
Wickedform: Goodbye Q.
However, before he could do anything, the leader of the Ryn launched himself at Wickedform and carried him into the air. The guards were picked up and thrown clean across the stadium and Wickedform was pounded into the ground. It was amazing that hadn't killed him. The Goblins ran for their lives but were picked off by Ninjas and Ryn. Only the Guild and Vortz remained. The Ryn stood before them.
Vortz: Wait, you're on their side?
Leader: We are on nobodies side, but we do not have tolerence for Goblins who enter our area of the Land, trying to start war. I am Vu'San. I have been watching you for some time.
Hoji: What are the Ryn?
Vu'San: We are a race that have lived in the Land for long before humans. We are intelligent beings, unlike this fowl Hobgoblin assumed, and skilled with the axe. Vortz tried to get us to help him destroy the Land but we chose to help you, and as long as the Guild is around, we vow to help you in times of dire need. Only when you most need us will we come.
During this speech, Vortz had been trying to make a plan in his mind. He grabbed Shadowists sword and tried to run for the exit. Vu'San moved so quickly that they barely saw him move. One minute Vortz was running, next he had an axe in his chest. He collapsed to the floor, weezing heavily. The Ryn raised there weapons.
Q: Don't kill him...
The Ninjas stared at him.
Q: He is going to die anyway...it would just be to lower yourself to his level.
He pulled Vortz to his feet.
Q: Go.
Vortz slowly made his way out of the Stadium leaving a trail of blood. The others watched, knowing it would probably be the last they saw of him. 30 seconds passed.
Indigo: What do you want from us? Why are you helping?
Vu'San: Peace. Peace is all we want.
Vortz lay on the beach staring at the sea. He knew full well he was going to die, but he wasn't going to try and prevent it. This wasn't how he planned on making his life, all he had wanted was for humans to treat him as an equal. But, as realization dawned, he knew he had gone about it in completely the wrong way. He shood have never tried to resurrect the Storm Giant. Zombies were a stupid idea. The Door was never going to work. He let the sea lap his feet and smiled, then with a sharp pain in his chest, went limp.
The next morning, a ship called the SS Hope docked on that beach. A huge captain with a bushy beard climbed down to near where Vortz lay. If he was suprised to see a Hobgoblin lying stiff on the beach then he didn't show it. He picked up Vortz and carried him on board. None of his men questioned what he was doing and he didn't tell them.
Man: Lucifer! Get me a towel.
The first mate appeared.
Lucifer: What the devil is that, Levi?
Levi: I met him once. His name is Vortz.
Lucifer stared at the white faced creature.
Levi: Check for the cause of death then bury him on the beach.
He left the room. Lucifer was about to cut open the Hobgoblins shirt when something amazing happened. Lucifer burst into Levis cabin.
Lucifer: He's still alive, Captain!
End of part 9.
Lies make baby Jesus cry, bitch.
My story Robert DiMorro is almost finished! I might sell the 50 page piece through Second Life first before I send it to publishers.
