These are a couple poems i have written. If you are a Writer's Guild regular, you may have seen them befor, but i wanted to post the here. I know it is not night, but i won;t be on late today and i want to be able to read peoples thoughts and comments when i come on tomorrow. : )
This first one is mushy, but i think it is a good love sonnet...
Portrait
An Italian Sonnet
By, K. Myst Williams
Look upon her beautiful face
Her dawn bright smile; contagious and warming
Her grasping presence and aura calming
Her deep lake eyes and capturing embrace
Her gorgeous curves, body, and flowing grace
Her song-like voice so gentle and soothing
Her light touch soft, but heavy and moving
Any one moment, still; enjoy her taste
An impression: kind, capturing and bold
Tightening chest, feeling of unrest, I-too
A focus: hazy, motionless, but told
A rising heat, a diving leap, I-flew
The meaning: heartfelt, loving, and controlled
An open mouth, but yet a sound, I-you
Painting Love… everyday.
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This one is a Surreal poem, not a real poem type, so i kind of made it up, but if you are skeptical... refer it as Free Verse instead. It is an odd poem, but it is surreal... so keep that in mind. My first attempt at my newest poem type.
Alenio
Surreality Verse
By, K. Myst Williams
Swallowed dark unto itself,
The book of gold leads fall the shelf.
Mix and fade while Tic leads Toc;
Open closed, conscious yet to knock.
Pace afar, card or not;
Fold alone, dagger meets the sign of the cross.
Stream of red, drip and drop;
Wrong beneath, tide lifts center’s top.
Through forward, time ponders stop-
Un-lifted past, all ponders change-
Pumping right left off the stage.
Soon the end as we began,
Where light has done all it can.
Rise and toy, religious void;
Cup an aero, not yet deployed.
For being, time and hand, is will destroyed.
Stare tear, no fast that can avoid;
Tense before grab, tension in the modern sound;
No option, what’s left is what surrounds.
Witness; kind cunning, but crowd-
Perfect wrong, not behind, but loud.
Under stone; feel the heart not yet but found.
I have about four more underway which are all almost complete that I will be posting soon entitled:
Perfect
Sins of the Righteous
100 Lined Personal Prayer
Tear
Give me your thoughts on the ones i just posted. Critique, praise; i am curious to hear all points of views. Thanks alot guys.