http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/483448
Alright, so this is my first submission. Every instrument I used in it were samples from FL Studio, cause I'm generally new and didn't know of any way to get better soundfonts or that there were VSTs in FL I could've used.
Nonetheless, I would LOVE some serious criticism on it. It's a Hip-Hop beat, so I focused mainly on the drums in it, but that doesn't excuse if my melody is lacking, or if both is lacking. Please let me know what I need to do to fix it. If you can tell me how to fix it, I would love you forever, but if you can't then just tell me what needs fixed and I'll figure it out.
I would really and truly appreciate any kind of critique at all.
Also, please don't just give it a 5 or a 0 unless you think its that good. Which, I know it isn't 5 worthy but I feel as if it isn't 0 worthy, and I've already been 0-bombed. Give it a score you think it deserves, please.
I really appreciate the reviews, I really do. I will respond to every single one of them, and I'll probably review you back as well, if I manage to create the time in my not-so-busy life. Thanks a lot guys.