This is a song I originally wrote last year for the 2011 Tsunami/ Earthquake victims and survivors in Japan. I rewrote it this year on account of not knowing what Mastering was this time last year.
At 4/6/12 08:33 AM, mandog wrote: Can I join? I am going to try and put more criticism in my reviews and I think this will be a good way to learn more.
To be honest... no. Always try to write just a few paragraphs about what you think is good and bad about a flash/song/piece of art.
Of course, you will have to write a different review for each type of submission.
For movies I always look to three things: the animation quality, the sound and if the video succeeded in what it wanted to accomplish (make me laugh, inform). Next to that, I write some things that I noticed during the movie, but don't fit in these parts. Like creativeness, story, etc.
For games I look at the same things as movies, but then also to if everything worked, if the game concept is original, and if it isn't too repetive.
For audio I usually divide the music in different parts, and tell the author what was good and bad about each of the parts. Did it sound nice, were there any special effects, or was the calmness of the song what made it really good. Or bad of course.
If you look at art you can often immediately see if it deserves a seven/eight or a four. If you can give the author any pointers, do it. Say what you like, what parts need more detail, and what parts are just fine. Did you like the colours the artist used, did you think the shadows are nice, and did you enjoy it as a whole?
These are just some things you can look to, and you don't have to include all of them in each of your reviews.
I would prefer a few thought-out reviews over a ton of one or two sentence reviews.
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At 4/6/12 08:49 AM, mandog wrote:At 4/6/12 08:45 AM, Knuckstrike wrote: These are just some things you can look to, and you don't have to include all of them in each of your reviews.Yeah that's why I said I want to improve rather then just being lazy. I want to offer criticism from now on, I thought this would be a fun way to learn to be honest, with a point system and all.
I would prefer a few thought-out reviews over a ton of one or two sentence reviews.
Just because you cannot join now doesn't mean you cannot join ever. Just write about 10 reviews or more (more is always better ;) ) that meet this clubs standards (see Knuckstrikes post for reference) and then come back again.
Surf Nazis must die! || Wi/Ht? #38
My first review request! Thank you for your time. :)
Hey guys, reviews please?
can you review my song? my first techno.
20% cooler in 10 SECONDS FLAT.
If you would be so kind :)
At 4/7/12 01:49 AM, 1-800-CockJoke wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/479773
Please and thanks!
You can only request things you have made.
Greetings fellow Newgrounders,
This is a Egoraptor special as I have whipped up some fresh 100bpm Egoraptor madness, this is my first attempt at 100 bpm music and I really wanted to make a track for Egoraptor as his animations always make my day, so would anyone like some poundcake?
Please drop feedback & rate
- Jay T
![[Jay T] - Poundcake!](https://aicon.ngfiles.com/480/480100_medium.png?f1364642423)
Hi! Posted this track today. It was doing well but was bombed by a bad rating after a few hours. Can anyone give some ACTUAL POSITIVE FEEDBACK?! Thanks guys!
Hello!
My new "song" :D
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Unpublished Submission
And I want reviews for this too, because I don't know is the instrumental version better than this..
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Unpublished Submission
Hey guys, long time no see. Good to see SCTE3's still updating like a bawss.
Anyway here's a little track which I'd love some reviews on. It's only almost two minutes long so hopefully it won't take too long to review.
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At 4/3/12 11:38 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Member's Update #125
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9435 | 1470 / 2946 | 049.90% || 039 | 06 / 13 | 046.15% | Coop
Another sub-standard performance from em, I'm afraid. Let's see if I can't bust out of a funk here... Oh, it's Tuesday and I've not started yet!
At 4/3/12 11:54 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Flash Requests (3)
Audio Requests (11)
Art Requests (5)
Why am I wasting my time saying how nice it is to have stuff to review? Get on with it man!
I would be honoured if I could have you guys review my newest creation!
Thanks!
If you guys could review my track, that would be great!
At 4/10/12 10:12 PM, SCTE3 wrote: It was an alright week I suppose. There was not much done this week by members, me included. Coop and me got the most reviews done with 5.
That siad, I'm going back now, to review the art that I missed yesterday.
Member's Update #126
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9468 | 1475 / 2965 | 049.75% || 033 | 05 / 19 | 026.32% | Coop
02 ) 8964 | 1390 / 2970 | 046.80% || 021 | 03 / 19 | 015.79% | Haggard
Still poor, but I need to push on and get some reviews done.
At 4/10/12 10:31 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Flash Requests (3)
Audio Requests (18)
There's a perfect reason to do just this - I want to make sure that the artists in particular don't get missed out. Sorry Audiophiles, but there's that many of you, that neglecting you a little doesn't hurt as much.
At 4/10/12 10:12 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Member's Update #126
Thanks for the update!
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
01 ) 9468 | 1475 / 2965 | 049.75% || 033 | 05 / 19 | 026.32% | Coop
02 ) 8964 | 1390 / 2970 | 046.80% || 021 | 03 / 19 | 015.79% | Haggard
03 ) 6735 | 1036 / 1321 | 078.43% || 032 | 05 / 19 | 026.32% | SCTE3
Well, at least I got one review done from each category. I should aim for 6 reviews this time to break the 9000 points barrier.
At 4/10/12 10:31 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Flash Requests (3)
Audio Requests (18)
Well, three Flash Requests is already half way to the finish line. Shouldn't be too hard to find 3 audio requests out of the 18 where I can leave a review.
Surf Nazis must die! || Wi/Ht? #38
Hello review crew as always i've come back asking for professional reviews
A Goomba's life (S2) - Episode 5
Thank you very much
Tired of the same old Dragonball Z Fight movies. Then check out A Goomba's life. A Sprite Style sitcom comedy. Go ahead don't be afraid.
Easylistening/LightJazz/Moody piano.
Thanks!
I would definitely like to join in the future, but not right now. I don't completely understand the point system. What is the reason for points?
Every request I don't review today, I won't review this whole week. I'm going to Scotland without internet, so if you want to save time at the end of the week, you can make my line already in 12 hours.
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Progressive / trance track by me.
The reason I want YOU to review it, is becouse Pulsar told me, the kick is not loud enought, but it is as loud as it can be, he apologized later and told me, that he had lowered EQ setting as I said.
Another reason is that, I really like it, and I want this song to be part of my new album, so it need to be perfect.
Thanks 4 all reviews
was wondering if I could get a review please? thanks.
I would like to get feedback on this track that I made. I am pretty new to this still but know the basics and a bit more. I intend to get better and gain more knowledge on producing music so all I ask is for a good review.
I read the forum rules so I hope that I am doing this correctly.
I would really like to get a few reviews for that.
In case no one understands; the song along with the sub-par animation is social criticism to all this new "rap" and other music as well, which basically is always the same thing with slight difference, no effort in music videos anymore and generally - especially for rap - it's always about "i am better than x" - which is extremely annoying.
Music used to be so much more, and so did music videos.
Either way, reviews would be highly appreciated.
This is the song that I would also like a review on.
It's a loop.
