At 9/15/09 04:42 PM, Sonofkirk wrote: Suspended-3rd-Chord has done that with 3 accounts last year, that's pretty epic :P

Pretty epic?! That's the longest darn review I've ever seen :[]! He practically critiqued on every second of the song :O. *Sniff*, all of a sudden my audio reviews look short now :(.

Oh, and I think I might just be able to finish all the requests this time round... I managed to finish all the flash and art along with 3 or 4 audio requests so far, which could make up for me not having any time during the weekend.

At 9/15/09 10:46 AM, Joshsouza wrote: Okay, for the last time, im IN THIS!!! Yeah ive been stupid thats because i forgot to type in my request in so Sonofirk, can u list me?

You need to learn to write reviews - you've been writing YouTube comments.

Hi! Please check out my new song, I worked really hard on this.

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  [Assios] - Midnight

  by Assios

  Feel the beat!

  Song

  Trance

  5,134 Views

  PLAY

I'll respond to every review :)

Thanks in advance!

At 9/15/09 06:26 PM, Supersteph54 wrote: Pretty epic?! That's the longest darn review I've ever seen :[]! He practically critiqued on every second of the song :O. *Sniff*, all of a sudden my audio reviews look short now :(.

Yeah that's probably the longest audio review ever, that's more like an essay actually :P. And your reviews are perfect; you shouldn't need two or three accounts to review a submission and you can do as good with one single account.

At 9/16/09 01:53 PM, Lizzardis wrote: I know these are not mine, but we need more flash animations in which we can review, and these ones deserve to be reviewed! If these have already been said, I apologise.

They haven't been said earlier but the first one has gotten too much feedbacks to be posted on the thread, the club rules set a review threshold that is 50 reviews. So a submission with more than 50 reviews will be automatically rejected. Though the second one you linked is safe, I'll add it to the list if there aren't enough flash requests.

Would you mind reviewing this?

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  [TT] CD09 -thdrky-

  by YukariYakumo

  thdrkside is an African-American male.

  Movie

  5,035 Views

  (Ages 17+)

Hi guys!

Just dropping by to get my post-point. Still really busy at school, and I probably wont get to review 100 % before the next vacation, which is in two or three weeks.

Either way, glad to see that most of you all are still reviewing 100 %. I did a quick review now, just to avoid getting that star next to my nick. I'd do a few more, but I gotta go again.

Cheers!

At 9/17/09 12:17 PM, Soapbubble wrote: Hi guys!

Just dropping by to get my post-point. Still really busy at school, and I probably wont get to review 100 % before the next vacation, which is in two or three weeks.

Man, I actually preferred it when you were reviewing to 100%. Now there's less competition for me to go against and I'm less motivated :(.

Either way, glad to see that most of you all are still reviewing 100 %. I did a quick review now, just to avoid getting that star next to my nick. I'd do a few more, but I gotta go again.

Man, I'm almost definite I won't make it through all the requests this week. I'm really busy on my huge programming assignment, and I might have a chance to make it either if I do non-stop reviewing today and maybe a little tomorrow morning or if there's a big delay for the update which continues till about Monday night.

I noticed some posts saying you needed more flash review requests

This is my newest flash game. It passed judgment without any reviews. :(

It'd be cool if somebody could review this. I'll respond to any reviews, but it might take me a while. I don't get internet at home, ( or even cell phone service,) I live way out in the woods.

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  Star Trails 3

  by chesster415

  Collect stars that match your color while dodging the other stars.

  Game

  6,118 Views

  (Everyone)

This is my highest scoring flash. It's an animation of Lemon Demon's

Samuel and Rosella

. I'd kinda like a few more reviews on this too, if it's not too much trouble. I'll respond to any reviews on here too. But, it might not be too promptly.

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  Samuel and Rosella

  by chesster415

  they hate your generation.

  Movie

  5,909 Views

  (Ages 17+)

Thanks in advance.

The alliance, Chapter 3.
My friend PyronX was sad because I was the only one to review his animation, it is quite good, but it is the 11th episode in a series.(3rd episode in the second series really).
Would you be so kind to review him

Also how do I display the flash animation like you all do?

At 9/17/09 10:19 PM, GeneralAC wrote:

Also how do I display the flash animation like you all do?

You just copy and paste the link to your flash/audio, without using the 'Link' button. It'll come up automatically.

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  Deep_Town_Blues [Box-Killa]

  by Box-Killa

  JAzzy, bluesy cool stuff

  Song

  Jazz

  1,627 Views

  PLAY

yeah i like this 1

Hey, a friend of mine told me about this club here so I decided to post my demo because I'd really appreciate a thoughtful critique for my voice demo:

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  Sapphire's '09 Voice Demo

  by Sapphire

  My voice acting demo reel!

  Song

  Voice Demo

  10,035 Views

  PLAY

May I join this club?

At 9/18/09 07:41 PM, XIII13 wrote: May I join this club?

Ah, some of your reviews rather bother me...

Such as this one..

Why did you submit this? This is horrible. I'd give you constructive critiscm, but I can't. Everything about this sucks so bad. Try making real music, then submit it.

If you were to join and you left a review like that then you wouldn't be a member too long. Check out some of the other member's reviews such as Coop83, Haggard, etc.. and see what some good reviews look like. Your range from kind of helpful to useless and in this club we don't need any useless reviews.

So as of now I would say improve slightly and then come back. If another member disagrees with that then speak up.

At 9/18/09 08:36 PM, Fro wrote:

At 9/18/09 07:41 PM, XIII13 wrote: May I join this club?

Ah, some of your reviews rather bother me...

Such as this one..

Why did you submit this? This is horrible. I'd give you constructive critiscm, but I can't. Everything about this sucks so bad. Try making real music, then submit it.

If you were to join and you left a review like that then you wouldn't be a member too long. Check out some of the other member's reviews such as Coop83, Haggard, etc.. and see what some good reviews look like. Your range from kind of helpful to useless and in this club we don't need any useless reviews.

So as of now I would say improve slightly and then come back. If another member disagrees with that then speak up.

That particular one is old, (at least to me), and was a bad choice. I know. I've seen the RRC's reviews around, and know what is expected. Haveing this club would also motivate me to review, as I don't normally review submissions.

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  [dj-Jo] She (Aftermath Mix)

  by dj-Jo

  This song took FOREVER (2 weeks) to create!!!!!! lol, I thinks its worth 50 bucks XD jk

  Song

  Techno

  3,757 Views

  PLAY

^ this one is amazing lol! ^

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  [dj-Jo] Raving Egyptians DEMO

  by dj-Jo

  RAVING BACK IN THE YEARS!!! XD. Sequel to Raving Zombies

  Song

  Techno

  2,732 Views

  PLAY
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  =NGA= Pound The Beat

  by Naruichigarra

  HARD TRANCE!!!

  Song

  Trance

  2,704 Views

  PLAY

Thats all for this week!

E N J O Y

At 9/18/09 08:40 PM, XIII13 wrote: That particular one is old, (at least to me), and was a bad choice. I know. I've seen the RRC's reviews around, and know what is expected. Haveing this club would also motivate me to review, as I don't normally review submissions.

Okay, here's a very simple system for reviewing submissions in 3 paragraphs:

1) What did you like about it? Authors love praise and as a result, if you can give them that, they are more likely to read the rest of your review.

2) What did you dislike about it? Try not to be too harsh, as this can stop the author from reading further (Lately, I've taken to blending it together with paragraph 3 and going all out for the dislike / improve method)

3) How would you improve it? Reduce static on the sound? Add a voice actor? Subtitles? Increase / decrease the difficulty? Relatively simple things that even someone like me, who has no accomplishment with Flash can convey to an author, to help them improve their works.

Work to that and see what you can come up with. Perhaps write the reviews for this week, without the Review Request Club signature and then come back and I'll have a look.

Can you review my first submission, please?

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  A Grand Ship

  by Sgtkillstuff

  Mr.Bink and the Captain try to think of a name for their ship.

  Movie

  9,768 Views

  (Everyone)

At 9/19/09 08:19 AM, Coop83 wrote:

:An awesome list.

Thanks, will try that.

Work to that and see what you can come up with. Perhaps write the reviews for this week, without the Review Request Club signature and then come back and I'll have a look.

All right, I'll be back later then.

A quite bad week with more and more people who stop reviewing for the club :(. MutliCaminefan leaves us after four weeks of inactiveness, bye man. I'm letting EpicFail and Frenzy their chance to get back to reviewing before I remove them from the list - they should be since they have ratio under 20%. A rainy update for a rainy weather here in France...

And Steph, you forgot to add the RRC signature in one of your reviews, that's why you didn't earn the max point this week ;P.

Here is what you have to review for next update, on Sunday 27th (the list can be found here as well). And yay, as many flash as audio! The day when we'll have as many flash as audio plus some art will be a great day.

Flash Requests (8)
Blockopoly 2 **bugs Fixed By cheese123
The Harbor Of Honour By PeAtrit
[TT] CD09 -thdrky- By Yukari Yakumo (YukariYakumo)
Star Trails 3 By Internet Hobo (chesster415)
Samuel and Rosella By Internet Hobo (chesster415)
LF2:The Alliance Ch.3 By PyronX
420: Under the Influence By Hellraiser
A Grand Ship By Bryan Castillo (Sgtkillstuff)

Audio Requests (8)
Cast From the Stars (Chill MX) By Bracksta
[DJ Assios] - Midnight By Assios (GlowingMonkey)
WeHaveFreshCookies' Dance Song By WeHaveFreshCookies
Deep_Town_Blues [Box-Killa] By Box-Killa
Sapphire's '09 Voice Demo By Sapphire
j-Jo] She (Aftermath Mix) By Joseph (dj-Jo)
[dj-Jo] Raving Egyptians By Joseph (dj-Jo)
=NGA= Pound The Beat By dj-Jo AKA (Naruichigarra)

Art Requests (0)

Member's Update #12:
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

1 ) 1679 | 261 / 261 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 1655 | 257 / 262 | 098.09% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Haggard
3 ) 1595 | 247 / 247 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Fro
4 ) 1184 | 183 / 239 | 076.57% || 015 | 02 / 17 | 011.76% Insanimation
05 ) 897 | 142 / 152 | 093.42% || 111 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Supersteph54
06 ) 717 | 113 / 154 | 073.38% || 009 | 01 / 17 | 005.88% Soapbubble
07 ) 356 | 059 / 262 | 022.52% || 045 | 07 / 17 | 041.18% milinko959
08 ) 108 | 013 / 261 | 004.98% || 003 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% Sonofkirk
09 ) 085 | 014 / 232 | 006.03% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% EpicFail ***
10 ) 060 | 009 / 122 | 007.38% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% FlashtoorREV **
11 ) 039 | 006 / 037 | 016.22% || 033 | 05 / 17 | 029.41% Lizzardis
12 ) 027 | 004 / 078 | 005.13% || 000 | 00 / 17 | 000.00% Frenzy ***

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
****: User has been inactive for the last four weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests this week: 17
Total requests all time: 262
Review made this week: 83
Average per member: 6.917
Average per request: 4.882

*New To the List: None
Leaving the List: MultiCanimefan

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Fro and Supersteph54

Member's Update #11 - 9/13/09

hey could someone review my art
its a bit bad maybe but i sure could use some constructive criticism :D

At 9/20/09 02:25 PM, Painted-Gorilla wrote: hey could someone review my art

Hey, we'll be glad to review your art, though give us up to three links leading to your art submissions so we know which ones to review.

ok review this one :D
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/paint ed-gorilla/a-troll

At 9/20/09 09:05 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: A quite bad week with more and more people who stop reviewing for the club :(.

):

A rainy update for a rainy weather here in France...

Weather is nice in germany. :D

Flash Requests (8)
Audio Requests (8)
Art Requests (0)

8 flash and 8 audio requests, this is nice. Now we only need some art requests

Member's Update #12:

Thanks for the update!

[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 1679 | 261 / 261 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 1655 | 257 / 262 | 098.09% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Haggard
3 ) 1595 | 247 / 247 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Fro

Top 3 still going strong. And I'm now at 98% completion rate, pretty nice. It's going to be quite long until I get up to 99% though.

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Fro and Supersteph54

4 again. Would be nice to see some other names up here as well. :)

At 9/20/09 09:05 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: Flash Requests (8)
Audio Requests (8)
Art Requests (0)

Thanks for the update, Sonofkirk. Great stuff.

Only 16 requests this time around - shouldn't have too much trouble picking them off, so good luck to everyone else :)

1 ) 1679 | 261 / 261 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 1655 | 257 / 262 | 098.09% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Haggard
3 ) 1595 | 247 / 247 | 100.00% || 112 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Fro

3 amigos with 100%, plus supersteph closing the gap in 5th place :) We ride again.

A shame that no-one did my pirate piece for Talk Like A Pirate Day - I'd have requested that straight away, since it's partly my own work :)

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  PPC2 - Forest I

  by Monkeydelic

  Psychedelic Pussycat Club Nr. 2 - Forest I

  Song

  Ambient

  1,601 Views

  PLAY
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  PPC2 - Forest II

  by Monkeydelic

  Psychedelic Pussycat Club Nr. 2 - Forest II

  Song

  Ambient

  1,445 Views

  PLAY
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  PPC2 - K Time

  by Monkeydelic

  Psychedelic Pussycat Club Nr. 2 - K Time

  Song

  Ambient

  1,539 Views

  PLAY

Thanks in advance :)

At 9/20/09 09:05 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: Flash Requests (8)

Sweet, I'd much rather do flash reviews than audio, and a nice number for this week.

07 ) 356 | 059 / 262 | 022.52% || 045 | 07 / 17 | 041.18% milinko959

A modest week for me, but I'll take it.

At 9/20/09 09:05 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: A quite bad week with more and more people who stop reviewing for the club :(. MutliCaminefan leaves us after four weeks of inactiveness, bye man. I'm letting EpicFail and Frenzy their chance to get back to reviewing before I remove them from the list - they should be since they have ratio under 20%. A rainy update for a rainy weather here in France...

Lucky you. Here you can boil eggs on the road...

And Steph, you forgot to add the RRC signature in one of your reviews, that's why you didn't earn the max point this week ;P.

Aww darn it! Curse the art request X[].

Here is what you have to review for next update, on Sunday 27th (the list can be found here as well). And yay, as many flash as audio! The day when we'll have as many flash as audio plus some art will be a great day.

I guess... Still, Flash is so much harder to review IMO, especially when you have a long adventure game or a complicated sequel to another movie which you didn't watch. Audio's easy... Art, well...... 50-50

Flash Requests (8)

:(

Audio Requests (8)

Nice :D

Art Requests (0)

Art's getting easier and easier to review for me, so I won't mind a few more art requests. Just gotta remember to add the sig at the end of my art reviews. D:

Member's Update #12:

Thank you for the update :D.

4 ) 1184 | 183 / 239 | 076.57% || 015 | 02 / 17 | 011.76% Insanimation
05 ) 897 | 142 / 152 | 093.42% || 111 | 17 / 17 | 100.00% Supersteph54

Say goodbye to #4, Insanimation >D.

*All Requests Completed:
...and Supersteph54

Ahh, just made it. I honestly didn't think I'd get all of them, since I just chose all the audio requests by random trying to review as much as I can till the last minute. I never knew I'd finish all of them :D. I hope I can do this well when school starts in another week :(.

Ambient Dnb

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  by <deleted>

  5 Views

just made this please review :D
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/paint ed-gorilla/clone-number-69